Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Hump day poem

It's the middle of the week
in the middle of a streak
of really, really rough days.

The heat is unbearable
my clothes feel unwearable
they only add to the heat haze.

I've been riding my bike
then taking a hike
all over the dealership lot.

I am all worn out
too tired to shout
"out of my way fuckers, or you will be shot".


SOUL: said...

nice. love the last line !
but whatever happened to the haikus??? i miss them.

hope you have a great day!

Amanda said...

Great poem! I can totally relate to those last two lines. ;)

JYankee said...

that IS talent! great lines and polly wehat most peeples are feeling right now... well... those of you that have to work... me.. im on vacation... im not rubbin it in no no no not me....

the landshark said...

HAHAHAHA! that's awesome.

Portia said...

YES! that is so great...i am totally hanging this one up.

Josie Two Shoes said...

HAHAHAHAHA! I just loved this! I am sitting in my office laughing - perfect poem, Jamie - EXCELLENT!! They say the best poems are born of intense feelings - this is the proof! :-) Let's get Hump Day over with!

SOUL: said...

i'm tattooing the last line on forehead for my next VA hospital appointment !!!